literature

kiss

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Literature Text

make me feel good.
make me feel pleasure.
take the pain away.

grasp my arms.
feel my skin.
kiss my cheek.
make me feel good.

rub my side.
kiss my lips.
play with my hair.
make me feel pleasure.

kiss my neck.
hold my body close to yours.
stay close to my heart.
i can hear yours beating.
take the pain away
about the picture:
well, i just wanted a good picture, that showed some emotion. and i really liked how this one turned out. and it shows my "bling-bling" which is this huge ring with the virgin mary on it. meh...

about the writing:
after watching monster's ball, i had to write the emotion when the halle berry's drunk, before they get "going". i had to capture that emotion. so i used " make me feel good" line. i really liked how this one turned out.
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This poem does the greatest sex scene in cinema history justice. The only thing that would have made this even better was if you included her forgotten line in that scene where she says "fill me up" 3 times. It’s one of those 'listen or you’ll miss it' sort of things. Hopefully if you decide to update this poem, you might include it? Again, great job.